KET寫作課：Dear Mrs

良好的開端是好作文的一半

同理良好的結(jié)尾也是好作文的必要條件

結(jié)尾處寫得好

不僅能起總結(jié)全文的作用

更能起到畫龍點睛、提分的效果

所以開頭結(jié)尾皆不可疏忽

接下來和王老師一起來看今日內(nèi)容吧

①Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

We should have food that is easy to eat like pizza or chips. Those are foods you eat with your hands.

Take care,

Ashley

②Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

Ashley

這兩篇文章的差異主要體現(xiàn)在結(jié)尾上

①的結(jié)尾更有親近感，也使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富

②就給人一種作文草草了事的感覺

會使老師對這篇作文的印象和感覺大打折扣！因此，在書信類作文中,我們最好在結(jié)尾加上問候語以及能夠升華和總結(jié)的句子,這樣才能使作文內(nèi)容更加飽滿，更有色彩。

練習(xí)+參考范文●●

Dear Jo,

Thank you for your kind words. I really enjoy geography and I am looking forward to working with you on our presentation.

I would rather do the presentation on deserts because it’s more unique than rivers. Deserts have such odd animals and plants that live in them because of the harsh climate.

To make the presentation more interesting, we could make a display with sand and some cacti. My mom has some plants we could use.

Talk to you soon

Mary

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